Free

I slow to see and hold, to clasp the hand
In childlike trust here calling 
To find my heart set free.

This is my first attempt at a kimo. An Israeli version of a haiku. I am learning from David again at: https://skepticskaddish.com/2021/05/03/enchanted-or-kelp-forest/

Go visit him to find out what a kimo is and while you’re at it, go read more of his work there and be inspired.

Bettie G May 3, 2021 / 8:15 pm

So beautiful, Anna! I look forward to checking out the Israeli “kimo.” Thank you! and God Bless you today.

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- Anna Smit May 3, 2021 / 8:31 pm
  
  I hope I did it correctly. I am definitely a beginner. Still learning. God bless you too, Bettie. 😘
  
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miriammatson May 3, 2021 / 8:44 pm

Love this! Never heard of it!

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- Anna Smit May 3, 2021 / 9:30 pm
  
  It’s so much fun trying new things. Give it a go, Miriam! Would love to read a kimo from you too.
  
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